Hi, everyone!

Today's the day that I go on holiday. I'll be gone from today to April 25th. While I am gone, I would highly appreciate it if you could provide constructive comments to my fic "Starlight Glimmer's First Student: A Human?!"

TStarlight Glimmer's First Student: A "Human"?!

• MLP: FiM
• Romance
• Comedy
• Slice of Life

Starlight Glimmer finally graduates from Twilight's program, and is told to find a student of her own! Twilight recommends going to a new planet, inhabited by "He-you-mains". She tries to make a friend, but finds something more!

• Sex
• Alt. Universe
• Twilight
• Trixie
• Starlight Glimmer
• Self Insert

Clockwork2003 · 116k words  ·  285  33 · 5.5k views

. I want to improve my writing and make the fic better and more authentic as I write, so any comments are highly encouraged.

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